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Annissa ([personal profile] annissamazing) wrote in [personal profile] timelord1 2011-12-19 01:29 pm (UTC)

So fantastic! I love K-9's scale for rudeness. I also like the setup for what appears to be a pretty big plotpoint with the auroras.

Do I sense a Jackie Tyler slap coming on? :D

Speaking of Jackie, is she prostituting or is she just sleeping with men she doesn't know well? The Jackie in canon had a lot of boyfriends. In this AU, I think it makes sense for that to translate into a way for her to support herself and her daughter. This London probably doesn't have much need for hairdressers. That's a bold choice in characterization, but not a bad one, I think. And if I read it wrong, then, boy, is my face red, but I still like it.

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