Yep, you just message someone and ask and then email. I can read through it for you if want. I don't write really explicit stuff but I don't mind helping other people with theirs. I worked with Who on her first hotsy totsy chapt. She is really good at that stuff by the way. Also, if you want hints, just pick up one of those historical romance fictions (bodice rippers I like to call them). As weird as it sounds, it's a good tool for learning how to go about writing uh intimate scenes. The only other advice I can give you is don't overthink it. It's really easy to get (giggles a bit) technical. It's more about making the reader feel it than it is to be uh technically correct. Okaaaay, now I'm about to have a giggle fit.
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Date: 2011-09-12 06:22 pm (UTC)